I am a plot woman. Characterization, tone, style, word-smithing, clever turns of phrase, psychological acuity - I appreciate them, but with me plot is king. If the plot falters, so does my enjoyment.
Not so with the reverse. I recall Russell Roberts opining that the plots of all P.G. Wodehouse's books were "the same." To the contrary - Bertie Wooster's and Jeeve's characters may be frozen; the tone, style and amusing word play may never evolve; the overall story lines may remain predictable; but the plots - the plots are always magnificent. P.G.W. was an absolute genius of the plot (as must be all masters of the long-form comedy, which may explain why they are so few in number).
For this reason, I remain amazed at my own ardor for Alan Hollinghurst's The Line of Beauty. The novel is, in fact, spectacularly plotted . . . but the pace of the plotting is so slow as to be imperceptible until the last forty pages. At that point, the entire world of the book shatters with such speed and reverberation that the closest analogy to reading the book's last two chapters is living through a head-on car-truck collision.
But why did I keep reading through the first 460 pages? I know people who didn't - "Same old, same old" from chapter to chapter, they complained. They put it down 100 pages into it and never picked it up again.
In my case, I kept reading because I marveled at Hollinghurst's astonishing skill at evoking moods that leapt from the page and manifested in a physical experience. From the scene - on page 10 - when Nick returns to the Feddens' Notting Hill house and intuits a burglary, I was in awe. I read that scene several times, trying to understand how he'd done it. "Just words on the page," I hmphed to myself, but they'd cast a spell of pulse-racing, quick-breathing terror and suspense over me.
This suspense - of waiting to see what a magician will do next - kept me reading, and I was not disappointed, from the surprisingly (to a heterosexual) arousing sex scene between Nick and Leo in the park, right through to its bookend, the revolting sex scene between Wani and Tristão at the party with Maggie Thatcher. The pull of this suspense was plot-like, just as the audience's anticipation in a Cirque du Soleil performance is.
The real magic, though, is that The Line of Beauty was not as plotless as a circus. Hollinghurst's immaculate mood-conjuring passages distracted from the machinery of the plot, and while I was dazzled by the beauty of his realism - so perfect that I experienced the physical reactions of an eye-witness - Hollinghurst was laying a merciless plot-trap.
His accomplishment suggests a nickname for him, in the tradition of his mentor-of-sorts, Henry James - known as "The Master": Hollinghurst could be known as "The Magician."
Immediately after I wrote the post British authors mentally masturbate about physics, stories suffer, I read Peter Dizikes essay in The New York Times about C.P. Snow, the physicist and novelist who coined the term "the two cultures" to describe the rift between scientists and literary types -- and I knew I would have to write an addendum to my previous post.
According to Dizikes, Snow made three claims that are worth considering in light of Ian McEwan's The Child in Time and Michael Frayn's Copenhagen. First, Snow laid the blame for the rift between these two cultures on the literati. Plainly, that claim is untenable today. With the advent of string theory, the mathematics required to understand physics has become so complicated that even other physicists, much less literary scholars, don't understand it. (See, for example, this New Yorker article about Garrett Lisi, renegade physicist, or this review of a couple of books about string theory.)
Moreover, the strenuous efforts at bridging this gap between the scientists and the poets is coming from the poets' side, with novels like McEwan's, plays like Frayn's, and countless other examples (Huxley's Brave New World, Ishiguro's Never Let Me Go, etc.) Oliver Sacks alone cannot make up for the majority of scientists who are incapable of communicating with the rest of the world.
Second, Snow argued that science, not literature, is what safeguards the progressive betterment of society because scientists are more morally reliable that the literati. This claim, also, is one that cannot be credited. Science, as the history of scientific advances in the 20th century amply demonstrates (atom bomb anyone?), is amoral. The job of scientists is to discover the truth, regardless of the outcome; the moral ramifications of the discoveries are someone else's job.
That "someone else" often, increasingly, is a writer. McEwan has reached the stature of "England's national author" (in the words of New Yorker profile) because, in novels like The Child in Time, Amsterdam, Atonement, and Saturday, he undertakes the task of sorting the moral ramifications of technological and social developments. Copenhagen, as well, is an attempt to parse the morality of working on an atom bomb in World War II, examining the question from multiple perspectives. (Whatever might be said about the moral failings of Ezra Pound, Snow's example of a literary moral degenerate -- or P.G. Wodehouse, or Gertrude Stein, to name a couple of other literati who behaved abysmally during WWII -- none can approach the scale of damage done by physicist Werner Heisenberg who, in addition to being a Nazi, was also almost certainly developing an atomic weapon.)
Third, according to Dizikes, Snow maintained that "20th-century progress was being stymied by the indifference of poets and novelists." This claim, of course, is risable. To whatever extent 20th century progress has been stymied, governments, corporations and academic mismanagement have been vastly more responsible that poets and novelists -- who, as the novels and plays cited above demonstrate, have been anything but "indifferent" to 20th century progress.
That said, something can be salvaged from Snow, namely his prescription for a generalized education. Specialized education, especially too early in life, narrows the mind and exacerbates the gap between "the two cultures." Moreover, a broader educational platform might obviate the need for incorporating physics lessons into novels and plays, leading to better, more elegantly-told stories about these issues (the point I raised in my previous blog post). After all, only when we're able to communicate easily across this divide will we be able effectively to bridge it.
So said Dorothy Parker, quoted in a recent NY Timesbook review of the book A Jury of Her Peers: American Women Writers from Anne Bradstreet to Annie Proulx, by Elaine Showalter.
Since I myself have been told -- repeatedly and derisively -- that I write "like a man," I grimaced reading Parker's prayer. If I were the praying type, my prayer would be: to live in a time when writing like a man was marketable!
That said, I've never been too fussed about whether I write in a gendered manner, or whether I can be classed as a "woman writer" -- a category that many of the renowned females who are the subject of A Jury of Her Peers rejected. I understand their objections. The task of all writers, whatever their genitalia, is to develop a voice, to write in a manner distinctive to their individual persons. Having crafted unique voices, why should women writers be subjected to critical generalizations that lump their achievements into the denigrating sub-class of "women writers"? And what male writer would find himself in an anthology of "Writers with Penises"?
Still, violent antipathy to being classed with one's peers bears with it a
whiff of mythologizing ("I'm the most unique woman ever"), as well as
self-loathing ("Don't group me with women -- contemptible"). It's also unreasonable. "Women writers" is as legitimate a classification, and as useful a basis for comparison, as "British writers" or "Post-colonial writers" or "detective fiction authors." Such classifications are external to the writing process, devised by critics (non-writers) to aid the understanding of readers (non-writers), and in their hierarchy of values, Stella Gibbons' vagina is more important to understanding Cold Comfort Farm than her internal process of developing an authorial voice, and the influence that P.G. Wodehouse, Evelyn Waugh or any of the other great, male, British, comic novelists might have had on that process.
If critics and readers find such classifications helpful, god bless, as long as they're reading. It makes no difference to my task as a writer, which is the honing my own authorial voice. In the service of which task I pray: Dear God, please make me stop writing like an unpublished author.